2007年7月21日土曜日

America trip

I am going to go America day after tomorrow. It is home stay. I have tow host family. I know the thing recently. I thought my family is one who name is Ubel. But I received other e-mail who name is Alana. I was very confused. Ubel family is going to summer trip during my home stay. So they can’t my care. So, Alana family does my care. It is good thing or bud thing for me? I don’t know which is OK. But I’m looking forward to the trip. I want to see the two families. I hope Ubel and Alana are good families. [106 words]

2007年7月18日水曜日

ID: wxyz
Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog

Titles of posts with links
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words
Numbers of comments
Example
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.03.13
185
1
1st (introduction)
April (150+ words)
Introduction of mine
2007.04.11
164
1
2nd (campus life)
May (200+ words)




3rd (your choice)
June 5 (250+ words)
Favorite sports 2007.06.12
251
0
4th (Kumamoto)
June 18 (250+ words)
Kumamoto
2007.06.18
258
2
5th (review 1)
July 2 (175+ words)
Restaurant review
2007.07.02
184
5
6th (review 2)
July 16 (200+ words)
Movie review: Romeo and Juliet 2007.07.14
208
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Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

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2.0. Comments

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Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog




2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog



2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog




2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays




2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts




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* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
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3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

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Numbers of words
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial
44
2007.05.02
3.2. Best typing speed trial
106
2007.07.21
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials






4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog Titles of posts with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) Number of words Numbers of comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
2007.05.16
39
1
1-01


86

1-02


73

1-03


78

1-04


54

1-05


48

1-06


63

1-07


50

1-08


58

1-09


46

1-10


41

1-11


56

1-12


49









































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TOTALS:


Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

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5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

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No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?


5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week?

5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?


5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?

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  • "books" (plural)


  • "essays" (plural)


  • "quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)


5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
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  • Which labels, and how many posts each?
    • www (n)
    • xxx (m)
    • yyy (o)
    • zzz (p)
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  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?


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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?

  • How many of your blog posts include other media?
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5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?
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6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
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7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors:
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2007年7月14日土曜日

6th essay: movie review ‘Romeo and Juliet’


I watched ‘Romeo and Juliet’first time. I have known ‘Romeo and Juliet’, just the name. I watched this on my class.

First, I write about the outline. Romeo and Juliet’s first meeting was dinner party. Romeo felled in love with Juliet at first sight. And Juliet felled in love Romeo too. They loved each other. But there was an invisible barrier between people. The Romeo family and Juliet family was enemy. But they had made a match of it. It was secret. He left from her. He heard she was killed. But it was not true. But he didn’t know that thing. So, he was very sad. She thought if a rumor was going about that she was dead, he must be come back. She had drunk the strong sleeping pill. He saw her. He thought she was dead. So, he killed himself. She woke up him side. She saw him body. She were determined she killed herself too. They died.

Second, I think Shakespeare’s ‘Romeo and Juliet’ is a tragedy. The conflicting feelings made a sad story. I can’t understand the ardor of art. They have strong passion. They were so young. I can’t believe die. No matter what happen. But it is very interesting movie!!

2007年7月8日日曜日

Book review 1:12[L.A.Detective]

Los Angeles. Len Samuel is a private detective.Carmen Blane is prisoner of the Young Ones. They want $100000.Carmen's father is a rich man. Suddenly, Carmen bites Len's hand. It's Friday. Len is in Los Angeles. He's at the police station. Frank and Blane are at the police station too.

Book Review1:11[Who wants to be a star?]

Tina Daniels a famous TV star. Her mother has grand plans for her, but Tina is unhappy. She wants to get away from it all. She go to far. And she meet a old woman. She learn many things. She is living a very different life in the country. She sees new things all the time.

Book Review1:10 [Jennifer Lopez]


Her movie are on TV. Her musuc is on the radio. Jennifer Lopez is a Hollywood star and successful singer. She is a Latin performer. In movie and in music, Latin performers are suddenly very popular. She is very beautiful woman!

2007年7月4日水曜日

Teacher

I like the best teacher is my first teacher. When I was 6 years old, I met him. His name is Sakamoto. He was very kind. He was very funny and we were often played with him. But, I moved the elementary school. I was farewell everyone. That time, he gave me a CD. It was the famous song. I heard the song. It made me fine. I don’t forget him and the song.

2007年7月3日火曜日

Book reviw1:09[THE RONG ROAD]

Terry Fox has cancer and he has an artificial leg. He runs across Canada for sick children and he gets $10000000. I read about his Marathon of Hope, his pain, and his short life. This is a true story. I was very impression about this story.

Book Review1:08[Billy and THE Queen]

Billy and Rox are staying with their grandmother in Brighton. They dream of having expensive new bikes. Gran has a plan. The only things they need are camera. And they took a Queen of England. The guard follows them. But Billy and Rox do not stop. Two weeks later, they can new bike! Because, they can give competition!

2007年7月2日月曜日

Restaurant review


I write about restaurant review.

I went to this place this Saturday. I visited this shop first time. I don’t know the name. It was jus written Udon, Soba. There is oblique of ‘Round- one’. We want to have an urge for a shaved ice, because we played catch.

It looks very old. So, we were interested in the shop. We came in the shop. It managed a old woman. She was very kind for us.

First, we ordered udon. I ordered burdock tempura udon. It was very big tempura. Tempura was bigger than a dish. I couldn’t eat all. But it was very delicious.

Second, we ordered a shaved ice. It tastes of strawberry milk. The price was 300 yen. We shared a shaved ice with my boyfriend. It was very big and fluffy. It was dusted sweet milk. It was the best shaved ice that ever came my way.

I want to list an udon and a shaved ice picture on my blog. But I noticed that I finished eating. I took the outside. I think the shop is good unknown spot.