2007年10月24日水曜日

My favorite place to study

My favorite place to study

My favorite place is library in the KGU. I explain some my idea now. It is a two-story building. It is quiet place, so I can study hard. There are a lot of computers here, so I can do homework. There are movie booths, so we can watch movie.

Computer

There are a lot of computers in first floor and second floor. We have much homework every day. We must use computer. I can’t study hard in my house, because I tend to dullness. But, I can be absorbed in typing computer.

Movie

We can choose movies or CDs. And, we can watch or listen in booth. We can watch many people or one. I have watched movie with my friends. It is nice,

Magazine

There are some magazines. When I tired to study, I read a magazine. The magazine is for young people. It is easy to read for me. Many people are reading a magazine. I think it needs more magazines.

Study room

There are group study rooms. We have some group homework. We often gather here. We can speak in the room. And, the tables are very big. We use big sheet, so the table is useful.

Conclusion

These are my reasons and explain। The library makes us relax. We use here many way. Many people are using in a day. Let’s use the library!!

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2 件のコメント:

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Hey, Koyuki!

It seems like you've written about more than one place. So I suggest that you correct and refine the title of this essay to something more accurate like: "My Favorite Places for...", or "My Favorite Places in/on/to...". You also need to include a word count for your portfolio, and to add the label "essays" to help reviewers find and comment on your work.

Paul Beaufait さんのコメント...

Koyuki,

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